Script Coverage & Rewrite Coach
Finish Your Feature Screenplay

Rewrite Locked

Your Deadline Is Coming.
Your Script Still Isn’t Ready.Producers are waiting.
Contest deadlines are closing in.
Managers move on fast.
Fellowships only fund writers that are ready.Every day you put off the rewrite is another opportunity you’re losing.
This is your moment to finally finish it.I’ll hold you accountable with daily check-ins, guide you step-by-step, and push you through a complete rewrite in just four weeks — until your script is strong enough to send out.No more excuses.
No more delays.
Let’s get it done.Choose your package below.

Services

Professional Script Coverage & Full Rewrite Support
Get honest, detailed feedback — or hands-on help rewriting your screenplay.Written Coverage: $300
Five-page professional coverage
Grades on concept & premise, story & plot, structure, characters, dialogue, and writing ability.
One-page synopsis of your story.
Detailed written notes on every major element.Full Coverage Package: $749
Everything in Written Coverage, plus:
Up to 20 minutes of video notes
30-minute one-on-one Zoom call to go over the notes.Total Rewrite Package: $2,500
Four-week intensive hands-on rewrite — you’ll need to write consistently Monday through Friday.
Prose outline + slug-line scene-by-scene outline
Guidance on 3-act, 4-act, or 5-act structure
Daily Monday–Friday accountability check-ins
Weekly one-hour “study buddy” Zoom writing session
Video notes and detailed feedback throughout
Complete script rewrite with me guiding you every stepLimited to two writers per month.

About Me

Sammy Sarzoza

For nearly a decade I worked as a Quality Control Technician in Hollywood, watching movies for a living. That gave me an insider’s eye for what makes a screenplay click on screen.I also have a formal degree in screenwriting from Minneapolis College, and I’ve been selected for the National Hispanic Media Coalition’s TV Writing Fellowship (sponsored by ABC and NBC), been a finalist for the ABC Writing Fellowship, and placed in several other respected contests.What really sets me apart is this mix — I’ve been through the writing process myself, and I’ve studied thousands of hours of finished films.That lets me give you feedback that’s both practical and grounded in what actually works.
Most importantly, I don’t just hand you notes and disappear. I’ll hold you accountable and walk with you until your script is ready.Ready to get it done? Let’s talk.

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Testimonials

“Working with Sammy has been completely different from anything I’ve tried before.The video notes with subtitles are incredibly helpful — especially as a non-native English speaker. I could watch the videos, read the subtitles, take notes in Italian, and actually understand everything clearly. I went through them multiple times.His feedback is structured, clear, and very effective. The film references and suggestions he gave me were spot-on — I really absorbed everything and used it in my rewrite. He obviously knows his stuff.This is by far the best feedback experience I’ve had.”— Francesco Nuvolari

Why Work With Me?

Most script consultants give you a PDF and disappear.
Some services use AI or anonymous readers you’ll never meet.
That’s not me.

  • Every note comes personally from me — I actually read your script and care about making it better

  • Every note comes personally from me — I actually read your script and care about making it better

  • Video notes plus weekly live Zoom sessions — not just text on a page

  • I combine real screenwriting experience with nearly a decade watching films professionally in Hollywood

  • Built for writers with real deadlines: producers, contests, managers, or fellowships

If you’re done with generic feedback and half-finished rewrites, I’m the one who will actually get you across the finish line.

FAQ

How quickly will I get my coverage?
Written and Full Coverage packages are delivered within 10 business days of receiving your script.Do you only work on feature screenplays?
Yes, I specialize exclusively in feature-length screenplays.What file formats do you accept?
I accept standard PDF screenplays.Do you work on TV pilots or short films?
No, I focus exclusively on feature screenplays.Do you accept outlines or partial drafts?
No. I only accept completed first drafts of feature screenplays.Will you personally write on my script?
No. I provide guidance, notes, and structure help, but you do all the writing.Do I still own all my work?
Yes, you retain full ownership of your script and everything you write.What if I don’t finish my rewrite in the four weeks?
There’s no guarantee you’ll finish in four weeks. My goal is to get you there, but at the end of the day it’s on you. If you need more time, you can continue with additional weeks of service at an extra charge.Is the Rewrite Package really daily check-ins?
Yes. Monday through Friday I’ll check in with you to keep momentum and hold you accountable.When is payment due?
Payment is due upfront before any work begins.Do you offer revisions if I’m not happy?
My goal is to give you honest, authentic feedback. Because of this, there are no refunds on coverage packages.Can non-native English speakers work with you?
Absolutely. My video notes with subtitles have worked very well for international writers.